You make me smile when I’m feeling down,
I throw these fits but you never frown;
You’re a little piece of my dreams come true,
You’re the reason everyday I feel brand new.
You think I’m pretty even drenched in rain,
My makeup spoiled, my face all stained;
You laugh at all my senseless jokes,
Buy me chocolates even though you’re broke.
You can hear me ramble all night long,
And God knows for that you gotta be strong;
You always come wash away my tears,
Everytime you’re beside me I know that you care.
Every step I take you’re always there,
You tell me to move on without a fear;
You leave me restless when you’re not around,
Loving you is a miracle that I’ve found.
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After I wrote mine and you reading I came and read this – of similar ilk we seem to be. I like this –
You think Iβm pretty even drenched in rain,
My makeup spoiled, my face all stained;
My favourite lines
Thank you for visiting as now I know of you and yours. π
Thanks a lot for visiting and for your kind words π
I really, really like the simple words and rhymes and rhythm in this poem. It makes me happy for you!
Thanks a lot lly1205 for your praise, it really inspires me π
Sweet! And I love the picture. π
Thanks a lot π
Beautiful! Wow! Seriously.. I am turning into a devout fan of your works now! π
Thank you Shubhendu..I am honored that you feel that way π
sweet and beautifu π
Thanks a lot sweetie π
This is so lovely. Makes me feel giddy and wanting to feel this way in Love *big grin* nice one
Thanks a lot scorptastic π Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy too π
This is so beautiful! …….Paula x
Thank you for visiting π
Heh there Random Average Girl, everyone needs one of those!
Hehe yes indeed π
Reblogged this on randomaveragegirl.
A beautiful picture of a beautiful relationship that you painted with your words.
Thanks a lot for your kind words π
You just defined TRUE love. May it be an everlasting love.
A love I hope to find someday…
We all do. Thought I found it. I was wrong.
I’m so sorry to hear that. I hope you are fine now. You did mention you moved on but it still can be hard to have those memories from a better time.