Loving You…

You make me smile when I’m feeling down,
I throw these fits but you never frown;
You’re a little piece of my dreams come true,
You’re the reason everyday I feel brand new.

You think I’m pretty even drenched in rain,
My makeup spoiled, my face all stained;
You laugh at all my senseless jokes,
Buy me chocolates even though you’re broke.

You can hear me ramble all night long,
And God knows for that you gotta be strong;
You always come wash away my tears,
Everytime you’re beside me I know that you care.

Every step I take you’re always there,
You tell me to move on without a fear;
You leave me restless when you’re not around,
Loving you is a miracle that I’ve found.


23 comments on “Loving You…

  1. After I wrote mine and you reading I came and read this – of similar ilk we seem to be. I like this –

    You think I’m pretty even drenched in rain,
    My makeup spoiled, my face all stained;

    My favourite lines

    Thank you for visiting as now I know of you and yours. πŸ™‚

  2. lly1205 says:

    I really, really like the simple words and rhymes and rhythm in this poem. It makes me happy for you!

  3. Thanks a lot lly1205 for your praise, it really inspires me πŸ™‚

  4. milai says:

    Sweet! And I love the picture. πŸ™‚

  5. Beautiful! Wow! Seriously.. I am turning into a devout fan of your works now! πŸ™‚

  6. Thank you Shubhendu..I am honored that you feel that way πŸ™‚

  7. Gunjan says:

    sweet and beautifu πŸ™‚

  8. scorptastic says:

    This is so lovely. Makes me feel giddy and wanting to feel this way in Love *big grin* nice one

  9. sakuraandme says:

    This is so beautiful! …….Paula x

  10. cpsoul says:

    Heh there Random Average Girl, everyone needs one of those!

  11. Hehe yes indeed πŸ™‚

  12. deanabo says:

    A beautiful picture of a beautiful relationship that you painted with your words.

  13. Ray says:

    You just defined TRUE love. May it be an everlasting love.

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