If only had I known
You to be so cold
I would not have bared
My vulnerable heart to you.
Wish I was not blind
To your deceit and to your lies
Wish I had known better
And not let you in.
I’ve crashed and burned
Turned to ashes
Only to look back and wonder
Would it be different
If I had known..
Your poem made me shiver! Love it!
Thanks Ruby dear 🙂
Wouldn’t it be great if people came with a warning? Terrific writing.
Thank you Bo 🙂 and yea they should come with a bright neon sign 😀
if we had foresight would we ever love?
It was a grandly done challenge RG 🙂
Thanks Amber * kisses* love is indeed the greatest risk we take..
You accepted and rose to the challenge and I am so grateful and honoured that you did. This was exceptional my lovely – thank you xx
Aww thanks 🙂 I loved doing the challenge and it is actually the first challenge I’ve ever done 😀
Shall I set you another? 🙂
I’ll try my best to do it justice 🙂 😀
So true.
Thanks for reading 🙂
im speechless….
u do that evertym…my god ur a terrific writer…
Thank you di 🙂 🙂 I’m flattered 🙂
I think even after being in this is state, its important how one reacts to it.. I suppose every word was so pure by you… great…!! loved it..
Thanks Shiv… and yes our reaction to adverse situations affects our lives the most..
Learn from this and live better because of it. Dwell not on the past, but focus your energy on the future. The future is yours.
It is always nice to hear such encouraging words…thank you 🙂
You’ll drive yourself crazy focusing on the past. Learn from it. Never forget it, but don’t dwell on it. 🙂